MR JUDGE FEEDBACK

Liam, I'm afraid what you have completed so far is just not good enough. Im concerned that you are  not demonstrating your clear classroom media ability (verbal) in your written work. This needs to change if you are to succeed.

1.   NO PRELIM TASK VIDEO EMBEDDED FROM YOUTUBE

2.   NO PRELIMINARY TASK EVALUATION EVIDENT

3.   NO BLUE VELVET TEXTUAL ANALYSIS (COULD USE BOND: SPECTRE INSTEAD)

4.   NO BLUE VELVET SCREEN GRABS IN PLACE

5.   NO BLUE VELVET VIDEO EMBEDDING IN PLACE

6.   TEXTUAL ANALYSIS OF THE OPENING OF SE7EN WITH IMAGES AND VIDEO EMBED FOR SE7EN

8.   FILM NOIR & HISTORY OF GENRE (HSR) + IMAGES/VIDEO EMBEDS

9.   STEREOTYPICAL REPRESENTATIONS OF THRILLER/HORROR GENRES/CHARACTERS

10.                 TEXTUAL ANALYSIS OF OPENING OF A HORROR FILM – WOMEN IN BLACK/SCREAM etc.